Taking stock of my work

1. 
   I think that I told my story relatively well. However, if I were going to change something about my paper it would be where I had an epiphany; I want that part to sound more intelligent. Because the way it is now sounds kind of phony like I ran out of steam.
2. 
   What I did especially well was that I kept my chronological order in step.
3. 
   I could still improve my length and the flow from paragraph to paragraph.
4. 
   I first started my paper by writing ideas down in class; then I went to typing my thoughts down on the computer. Later I had a friend revise my paper, made corrections and handed my paper in.
5. 
   (refer to number 4)
6. 
   I did not use pictures in my paper
7. 
   Other people’s responses did not really influence writing, besides changing some grammar or comma errors.
8. 
   What I would do differently next time… is to hopefully get assigned a paper that has more restrictions on it and is not so broad in length and quality.